First of all, thank you so much for reading the story! I could repeat it a million times, and it would not be enough. If you have a couple more minutes, here are a few questions that will help me with the second draft (dec 2020 edit: I have completed the revisions based on everyone's feedback in 2019, but I want to keep this page out of gratitude to all those who helped to make the story better!)
1. Do you feel that the sport story-line for Daya was tacked on and/or unrealistic?
2. Did you feel invested into Daya and Mike's relationship?
3. Mike's PhD story-line wasn't covered -- did you feel his professional growth was missing vs. his personal struggle with the health issues?
4. Were the sport lingo/skating scenes overpowering the story and/or too nerdy?
5. Were any of the side-characters taking away attention from Mike&Daya's story (i.e. Pavel & Shanti?)
Thank you so much for taking your time to read and comment!
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Winners Don't Have Bad Days (Watty 2020 Winner, Romance)
ChickLitWhen a total stranger knows what eats you, maybe they are your one true love. Even if you don't know it yet. || On Friday the 13th, two twenty-something, Daya and Mike, end up in a mutually beneficial arrangement: she is his caregiver after he break...
