-lovelydaisies

chapter twelve of
          	cupid has been
          	published!

RebeccaWinter9

Hey. With your Mikaelson siblings soulmate fanfic Cupid. Please stop following the mistakes of others with the soulmate storyline. Because it starts with a good plot but ends up following the show too much that it has no use for your OC Soulmate but as a side character. It happens too many times with these. Specially with Elijah. He focuses on Elena too much that I as a reader and a Romantic at heart who loves soulmate ideas don't see Elijah's soulmate bond with your OC. All I see is the show Elijah that will have a fling with Katherine and follow Hayley like a puppy ignore something as sacred as a Soulmate. Many writers who just follow the show end up following this trap. If Elijah's soulmate bond is there he would focus on his soulmate and not care about Elena. He would want his Soulmate safe first before anything. And I'm not getting that. I'm getting way too much of Show Elijah. And not Soulbonded Elijah. For your OC it's starting to look like a Side character that doesn't really change anything in the story. She's the Matt Donovan of the story. If Elijah has a soul bond he would not run after Elena. He would find a way to keep his soulmate safe. Because they don't know if Klaus would hurt her. So instincts would be to keep the mate safe. But it looks like it Save Elena ignore the mate and just sideline your OC and just follow the show. 

-lovelydaisies

@RebeccaWinter9 okay✌✨i didn't realize you were able to see my drafts. like you're bringing up scenes that haven't yet happened and you speak like you know how i'm going to write them lol. go write your own fic where you can write the scenes however you want✌sorry if this seems rude but me saying have a good day was end of the conversation and you still bring up the same points. you have been heard, thanks <3
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RebeccaWinter9

@-lovelydaisies if there is more then one way. Why write it like everyone else. If you don't believe me read the other soulmate stories like yours and see the similarities to your writing. It's the same as the others. They save Elena. Elijah has a fling with Katherine. Klaus sleeps with Hayley. They have Hope. Elijah follows Hayley around like a lost puppy. While the character becomes either okay with it or bitter. For the story the OC becomes sidelined or a target and gets killed. And they follow a plot not meant for the OCs POV. The Vampire Diaries is a book that's Elena telling her story. What happens to her. It's not meant for OCs to follow the storyline. Unless you have your OC steal lines and other Main VD Characters plots or lines or actions. Where would your OC fit in with Elena's storyline? When she knew nothing until they came to her. It's why I call it a trap for Soulmate Fanfic to follow the shows storyline. I just wanted to help. But you didn't want it. 
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1-800-yuhhh

@-lovelydaisies bye she wrote a whole essay. girl keep writing ur way bc it’s so good
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