ChocolateAndT

Hello! The past couple days, my chapters have suddenly been filled with spam links in the comments. There are way too many for me to delete each one. So just a notice, please do not click any links in the comments!! They're spam and will probably harm your device or take information. They usually talk about adaptation, plagiarism, finding the novel elsewhere, etc. Take care and be safe!

rocksolidgirl

Is it still too soon for you to comeback? . Not pressuring you or anything, just eagerly waiting for any update.

LillianEmmanson

@rocksolidgirl Like she said no pressure but please update
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ChocolateAndT

@rocksolidgirl aww thank you for still remembering this series!! I've recently been reviewing my notes and hoping to get back into writing soon! I can't say it'll comeback soon as I want to prepare a few extra chapters before I start publishing again but it'll be out closer than ever before!! Thank you so, so much for your patience!
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Gauravkj96

Brilliant story there, mate.
          Loved the part one. And can't just wait for speedy updates on the second..
          
          Beautiful plot, characters, narration.. all set for a great novel!

Gauravkj96

@ChocolateAndT :)
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ChocolateAndT

@Gauravkj96 shucks, thank you so much for your kind words and for reading!!
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travallene_V

Hey it's been a long time since I wrote something in romance, and your stories seem to be amazing!! If you've a moment to spare could you read the story and give me the feedback?? Any kind of Constructive Feedback is helpful!! Thank you!!
          Here is the link to the short story!!
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/339812088?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=travallene_V&wp_originator=D49Awh5JvgGUcWFro5jjotDtzlfeJkzMp%2FozOFc6ll6JVEy%2BpHh3gJ2PiRFi8nqGgXDNlqUJ33DiV9LsE3iUQ5hvLUw7s4F4fSTILkMgXRpidwSkGnqu2FRKM5IYLmry

travallene_V

@travallene_V hey! Thanks for the feedback!! It was great to hear from you. I am trying to write more stories, and have a couple of ideas, but yeah.. life happens... Anyways.. your comment is motivating enough to write my story right away!!! I'll share my new story on this platform ASAP. Thank you again for your encouraging words
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ChocolateAndT

@travallene_V @travallene_V Hello!! Sorry for the late response! I think you have something great here! Your writing style and quality is very professional and I love the concept you've started here with the story sharing! The only bit of constructive feedback I can give is to maybe have more sensory descriptors (what the characters are doing, smelling, seeing, feeling) when there is dialogue. But that's nitpicking! The flow and readability is great! Is would be very interesting to see this as a longer story where Ahaan has many stories he shares and a motive to sharing them. Thank you for sharing your writing!
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ChocolateAndT

Hello! The past couple days, my chapters have suddenly been filled with spam links in the comments. There are way too many for me to delete each one. So just a notice, please do not click any links in the comments!! They're spam and will probably harm your device or take information. They usually talk about adaptation, plagiarism, finding the novel elsewhere, etc. Take care and be safe!