@Dreamer-sj You’ll never be able to please everyone. I read the entire story and I found it to be quite good, and a lot of character growth. Also… the people who make these negative don’t keep in mind how the mating bonds work or were designed to work in these stories. They have a real life human mindset. If they don’t like your work than they don’t have to read it. If this was a story related to real life human world, than I they just might have made some worthy statements. However it is NOT, so their comments should hold no value. Yeah so what, in the human World a victim shouldn’t be forced to stay in a bond or made to feel emotions for their rapist… but this isn't the human world, it’s a story about Werewolves. And werewolves are typically animalistic in nature in everything they do even in their bonds. Werewolves don’t feel the typical human emotions like we do. So ignore the negativity because clearly those who do understand the story behind werewolves in itself, and the way the bonds are designed, etc. etc. do appreciate your story and creativity. Don’t let those people cripple you or force you to delete your story. Especially when there are so many more who can enjoy it. Besides, you shouldn’t conform yourself be what others think you should be. Be yourself. Be unique!