JillianJuneBug

Wow, I remember reading "Rewriting History" a while ago and it still gives me the same exciting and happy feeling I get with every chapter. (Y/N is totally me too!) I just wanted to say that this is the best Obito fanfic I have ever read and you have inspired me so much with every chapter. I am so grateful and hope that one day I can be just like you. Thank you for every single second of time you put into making this.

Hello, dear readers! These past couple months, I went through each chapter of Rewriting History and made various updates which range from minor grammatical/spelling/formatting corrections to complete scene or dialogue changes. The plot remains exactly the same, but you may find some added detail that wasn't there before. See below for a detailed outline of what was updated per chapter: 
          
          Ch 1-20, 22-24, 29, 32-33: Grammatical/spelling/formatting corrections. Some strings of dialogue or descriptions may have been added or altered, but not significantly enough to warrant going into more detail.
          
          Ch 21: Added a lot of extra dialogue as well as made us/(y/n) stronger and a more capable fighter. 
          
          Ch 25: I hadn't realized it, but this chapter was previously written in a rather mean-spirited tone which wasn't the intent. I rewrote most of the chapter to be more in the spirit of Naruto by having us meet Kabuto earlier (so our actions make more sense), as well as having Minato and others back us up. Overall it's a much lighter tone that I'm very happy with.
          
          Ch 26-27: These also felt darker than intended, so I removed unneeded details and added more action. I also replaced a lot of our dialogue and made us a bit stronger so our actions feel more understandable and earned.
          
          Ch 28: Added a couple more touching scenes to make my heart explode <3 <3 <3
          
          Ch 30: (On Ao3) Added an extra 1k words of pure, unadulterated smut >:) 
          
          Ch 31: Dialogue changes and removed the use of(Name) due to readers confusing it with (y/n), taking them out of the story. I removed (Name) and replaced it with more generalized, less distracting terms. 
          
          If you end up rereading, please let me know what you think! Also feel free to let me know if you're interested in more updates or changes and what you would like to see! ^^

HI! BASICALLY I JUST WANT TO SAY HOW AMAZING OF A WRITER YOU ARE. i just finished “REWRITING HISTORY,”- it’s my first obito fanfic I’ve read and honestly, I think it set very high standards for anything else I’m going to read 
          
          it’s such a rarity for me to cry over books when reading them, I’m not an emotional person, but not only did this made me cry, I cried uncountable times throughout the chapters. (maybe the fact i kept playing sad naruto themes while reading LDNSN but still) i don’t know how you do it, and i know a lot of people already said this, but the way Y/N is written is so relatable, and understanding how she feels is so easy, it just makes it seem so realistic, and her relationships with everyone too.
          
          and Y/N’s flaws- her jealousy over rin, her doubts of why she was sent to the shinobi world also makes things so much more realistic, because that’s exactly what i would think as well or behave. it’s all written so beautifully omg, i could name more things i love about this, but there’s too much HAHA, as deidera would say, this story IS TRUE ART AAAAAH 
          
          sorry this is so much, but i just never had a book make me feel like this before, thank you so much, and your book deserves to be read by so many people!! i hope you’re doing great and be safe! <3 

I hope you are well 
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I HAVE NO WORDS RO EXPRESS HOW MUCH I LOVED YOUR STORY! I HONESTLY WASN'T THAT INTERESTED IN OBITO, BUT WHEN I READ THAT, I SAW THE UCHIHA IN SO MANY DIFFERENT WAYS.......I NOW LOVE HIM!!
          
          OH GOD THE STORY JUST MAKES SO MUCH SENSE, THAT I EVEN REGET IT NOT HAPPENING IN THE ANIME! THE READER IS SUCH A RELATEBLE CHARACTER, MAKING IT TRULY REALISTIC! THE CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT WAS TEAR BRINGING! OUR RELATIONSHIP WITH KAKASHI JUST.....IT KEPT ME ON MY TOES! 
          
          I JUST LOVE YOUR STORY SOOO MUCHHH!!!! AHHHH!!!

Hi! I absolutely LOVED your rewriting history book! 

Did you miss me? I’m just kidding 

Are you alive?

Hi again! You feeling well? Sure hope so :)
          
          Anyways how are you? Im bored here trying to search something to read, but ehh so ye here i am!

Goodness can i just say you are such an inspiration your your writing is just IMMACULATE and the grammar is just✨ Your Obito story is so perfectly put together and everything connects so fluidly it's truly such an amazing story and it's been my main inspiration to write my own obito story that gives readers the same feeling i got when reading your story truly like reading an amazing novel you are quite the writer keep up the great work and have a wonderful day!!