Mariette_Bonneville

Just a head warning, I may leave this app because I'm too weak to handle toxicity. Books on hold for now, migrating to quotev.

Taanh12345

@Mariette_Bonnevill Wait  I found it you follow me in quotev 
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ErisIdeya

I’m sorry people are resorting to these types of things. I have enjoyed each of your novels so far and have been looking forward to reading more. You do a great job with your characters. You do not use dialogue as a fill in for lack of scene descriptions. Your grammar and punctuation are excellent. Your scene descriptions are great. You have managed to avoid each of these, which happens to be some of my greatest pet peeves. You have your own writing style. If someone wants something then they can write it themselves. If they have a problem with your writing, tell them to pull the pinecone out of their butt. Or you can tell them to find a mirror and use their reflection to argue with. 

Mariette_Bonneville

@ErisIdeya thank you so much for your kind words and the time it took you to write this message 
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StephanySchwalenberg

Please don’t discontinue your novel what’s wrong with the Jen of this world I really enjoy reading it a lot as it’s interesting and I’ve been looking forward to new chapters a lot. You shouldn’t be discouraged you like what you like and dislike what you dislike that’s your opinion other people’s opinions shouldn’t matter that much bc everyone can like or dislike whatever they want.  I like a lot of different genres shojou, shounen etc. so it’s fine if you like something. So please continue writing this story it’d be a shame if you didn’t . 

Mariette_Bonneville

Just a head warning, I may leave this app because I'm too weak to handle toxicity. Books on hold for now, migrating to quotev.

Taanh12345

@Mariette_Bonnevill Wait  I found it you follow me in quotev 
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Mariette_Bonneville

My cat was almost kidnapped by a Facebook mom... cause they said she (jojo, my cat is a boy *face palm*) looked like a stray, too thin... Jojo is one with the food bowl. He is heavier than our 5 killo dog. If we lay on the floor he will eat us as well!!!

sweetgumballtree

@Mariette_Bonneville  lol was she judging by Pusheen standards or...??
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Nonamemyth

@Mariette_Bonneville Unrelated but why your cat and my brother have the same name?
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user17792597

Hello  Author-chan Can you do me a favor? Don't laugh at my idea 
          
          Hazbin Hotel/Helluva Boss Yandere  x Crying reader 
          
          The reader is a girl with an unparalleled angelic beauty. She was very beautiful like angels and God, and everyone who looks at her falls for her and her beautiful, sweet beauty. Whether a girl or a boy, they will find themselves loving her obsessively and madly because of her angelic beauty and voice.Ecstasy, just hearing her voice makes everyone feel ecstatic 
          She is very shy, gentle, humble, and very shy. She is so beautiful that angels become less beautiful in her presence. Everyone feels shy when they look at her short, delicate figure. She is so pure and innocent that she doesn't even know what sex is 
          
          One day, she mysteriously wakes up in hell and remembers nothing but her name and some confusing and bitter memories Where she hears in her mind sentences like (Never let go of your mother's hand...) or something like that. 
          She wanders around until the Princess of Hell finds her herself Charlie when she sees Charlie the reader and her innocent appearance She instantly falls in love with her, and all Charlie wants is to protect the sweet person in front of her 
          You take her to Hazbin Hotel 
          What will our sweet heroine do after the Yandere female and male characters become obsessed with her and also sanctify her from the first sight and want her for them at any cost, and their obsession develops? 
          
          If you don't mind  have a nice day 

user17792597

Or! I had an idea now 
            Well, the same character will be cute, shy, and crying And very nice 
            
            But the difference here is that Lucifer kidnaps her with the help of his wife, Lilith, after they monitor her and fall in love with her obsessively. After killing her parents who were psychologically torturing the reader, he then kidnapped her 
            Lucifer makes her lose her memory, then convinces her that he has saved her from danger The reader is truly convinced and stays with Lucifer's family 
            What would happen if she discovered that Lucifer was lying to her and began to regain her memories? Would she remain in Hell with the people most obsessed with her, or return to a life of torment in the human world alone? 
            
            Sorry for the inconvenience, have a nice day 
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Mariette_Bonneville

@user17792597 I mean that I have plans where many of the above you've listed will be mentioned in the current book so it will get repetitive if I use a very similar model.
            
            Ex: female beautiful reader 
            Same personality (shy, gentle, humble)
            Naive, she comes from Japan taisho era so the thought process of her time is different (people didn't use to have intercourse before marriage so she's a virgin)
            Tragic past
            Yandere characters 
            Lives in the hotel
            
            Too many similarities so it would be dull and honestly I would get writers block just trying to differentiate between them
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user17792597

@Mariette_Bonneville Yes actually request....
            
            So you want Mitsuri to be the reader? I didn't really understand...
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Mariette_Bonneville

Of course I get eye infection when I have motivation 

Mariette_Bonneville

This morning my kitten got killed by my 'step-dad' because he had an argument with my mum, how cute

e2314785645

@Mariette_Bonneville ..... where..... where did i keep my shotgun again?
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akemilyrss

@Mariette_Bonneville 
            I do not know what to say. This is truly savagery. I hope he finds his karma. My condolences.
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