Scarlet

Hi! I have some feedback for your story! First of all, I love the story plot already ^.^ It's so cute >.<
          
          Secondly, I guess just look out for the spaces and separate stuff into paragraphs. I usually type in my iPod (Which is a total pain because of spell check lol) and use a space before sentences.
          
            Anyways, you're doing great! (Just in my opinion at least)