bunbear301

Urgh! Guysss 
          	
          	I edited the chapters with the help of auto correct at places.
          	Please comment on the paragraph, if you find woman, girl or people after younger, so that I can correct it.

snowflake2808

@bunbear301 Did it!
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bunbear301

Tada!! 
          Your Mrs Kim is now "Eternal Adoration" 
          Let's see if you all can find the slight change I made in the chapter. ❤️
          I just published "1" of my story "Eternal Adoration | TK ". https://www.wattpad.com/1450637091?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=bunbear301

bunbear301

@snowflake2808 I understand. And thank you for all the praises, though I still can't pronounce the last word correctly.   :^)
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snowflake2808

@bunbear301 The change is quite evident in the introduction itself, making it hard not to notice.
            
            That's a tough one. I'd say it largely depends on individual preferences. Personally, I thoroughly enjoyed the original version, and now I am enjoying this one too. I can't really compare the two because I just love the essence of this story! You could change the name of the book, the titles of the characters, the cover—anything—but I am going to love it regardless. So, I can't answer with a simple yes or no.
            
            However, I must say that the change is refreshing. You've implemented it quite smoothly, giving the story a new edge and angle. Previously, it was obvious that the title "Mrs. Kim" belonged to Jungkook, but now it's like diving into a story where people expect a "Mrs. Kim," but it's actually "Mr. Kim." This was more applicable to the previous name of the story, but still I can't compare ;____; 
            I'm sorry if this doesn't help you, but to me, both versions are just greattttt, awesomeeee, superbbbb, fantasticcccc, beautifullllllllllll andddddd—
            supercalifragilisticexpialidocious!!!!!!
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bunbear301

@snowflake2808 I see... finally someone noticed it. TT. 
            What do you think about it? It's for good or original one was better?
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Alixa_w

Hello author , I saw your previous post about your book Mrs Kim and I loved the original version of the book so I was wondering if I could get an unedited copy ? . And also how do I pay for it ?

Alixa_w

@Alixa_w ok author , I trust you .
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bunbear301

@Alixa_w hello! The thing is the copy of the deleted I have with me has few missing scenes. So even if you want unedited version, there might be missing parts. I did change few things but that doesn't have much impact. Please read the book first. I promise, you won't be missing anything. ❤️
            And I can provide you copy of this book, after completely publishing it.
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bunbear301

The title of Mrs Kim is changed to - "Eternal Adoration"
          
          At what time do you all what me to publish the first chapter?

Taekooker6969

@bunbear301 Literally Dying for My FAVORITE OF ALL LIFE 
            THE BEST FF "MRS.KIM" 
            PLEASE RETURN THAT MASTERPIECE BACK TO ME FAST..........
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btsprplcloud

@bunbear301 if it possible as soon as possible  please
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Diell_1501

@bunbear301 at my area....already 13.20pm.....if we are in the same GMT maybe u can up at 14.00pm....
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bunbear301

I shouldn't be jealous from the Army's getting to hug Jin. 
          
          I shouldn't...
          
          I should not...
          
          I not ..
          
          Not..
          
          I....
          
          I'M F*KING JEALOUS!!

Diell_1501

@bunbear301 can i hug u instead....??
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Luciajm7

@bunbear301 I wish I was in korean
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btsprplcloud

@bunbear301 I WANT HUG TOOO I WANT TO BE THERE TOOO
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