Hey! I hope you are doing well. (A little bit about myself, I am writer and I recently opened my account on Wattpad.) I just started reading your story 'Forced marriage!' and it is one of the best story I have read so far. I loved the way you structured the story. I enjoyed it. I just wanted to point few things as a reader.
1. In the entire story, you used 'Y/n' instead of a real name. As a reader, I think I'd prefer to read the story with a particular name, for e.g. 'Min Yuna'. But, you can ask your readers about their opinions because everyone has different pov.
2. From your writing, I guess English is not your mother tongue. I would suggest you to use some tools for checking the grammar and sentence formation. The grammar in the story was a bit here and there. But writing a story in a different language is really courageous and I totally support you! If you are not comfortable using any tools then you may ask someone who can proofread your work for free and all you need to do is give them credits at the end of each part.
3. Also, I loved how you used pictures. You could have edited pictures according to the story (if you have time!).
Everything else was awesome. I am used to writing but I am new to Wattpad. You are one of my inspiration to start writing on Wattpad. Best luck for your further stories and I hope whatever I told helps you become a better writer!
