Hey there, I just read your novel "3rd time's a charm" (it's the 1st book I read of yours, and i definitely gonna read more;).
Let me share some views from the reader point of you. So the book was good, definitely no doubt about it. And you mentioned that you were not satisfied by the plot and we get it, in the chapter around 22-25, it was a roller-coaster, at one point I even thought of stopping it, bcz i was just so frustrated with brooks (like when he was before talking to his aunt was a blunder, and we get it he was just a teenage, and during the talk how he was saying that his life was going in circles, repeats, but he HIMSELF was not doing anything for that, just wanted others to fix themselves)
Also, I still don't get why he broke with Archie the 2nd time. It felt kinda idiotic, especially AT THAT TIME, bro. The time was not right at all.... but okay, they were being stupid, we all do stupid thing in life, I guess.
But it was worth reading it whole, worth the shot for sure, for them and for me, so tysm, keep it up;))))))))