Round 308 • January 14-20, 2024

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COMMENTING PERIOD: Sunday, January 14, 2024–Saturday, January 20, 2024 11:59 P.M. PST

ROUND ADMINISTRATOR: AmericanBruja

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COMMENT TOPIC: Comment on the author's use of body language and dialogue to bring forth the main character. Min. length: 3 sentences each chapter. Please post each response in the corresponding chapter.


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META ANALYSIS (Each chapter, in-line comments, at least 5 per chapter):

👍 or THUMBS UP-Elaborate why you think so. (at least one time each chapter [1 MANDATORY per chapter])

or NEEDS CAFFEINE-Elaborate why you think improvement is needed. (at least one time each chapter [1 MANDATORY per chapter])

💓 or HEART RACING (feeling excitement) [OPTIONAL]

😥 or TEARS (crying or feeling very emotional) [OPTIONAL]

or HEART (love something, more than a thumbs up) [OPTIONAL]

😵 or CONFUSED (don't understand something) [OPTIONAL]

😂 or LAUGHING (made you laugh) [OPTIONAL]

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Member: Partner Partner's Book - Chapters

ENFORCER: AmericanBruja

RonASewell • JLAnderson0713 Of Blood and Honor - 61

JLAnderson0713 • Psychadelish The Flame Game - Character Analysis 2 [please see instructions below]

Psychadelish • JLAnderson0713 In the Name of Love - 34

Echo4Echo • AmericanBruja American Bruja: The Los Angeles Cauldron - 18

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ENFORCER: MichaelHoliday

AmericanBruja • Echo4Echo Letters to Maxine - 16

IanReeve216 • AuthorJMColes Back Home (Book 4) - Prologue, 1.1, 1.2 [First chapters comment topic; see instructions below]

AuthorJMColes • IanReeve216 Tak - Sereena Parts 1-3 [First chapters comment topic; see instructions below]

JaxonBlacc • KGravez The Dark Between Dreams - 33, 34

KGravez • JaxonBlacc Coyote - 33, 34

KellyJBurke • MacReader Fractured Worlds Away - 26

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ENFORCER: SapphireAlena

AJMohlgan • SouthPawStance Devil Take the Hindmost - 20

SouthPawStance • AJMohlgan Cenicienta and the Midnight Bandit - 20

AmericanBruja • CIWilloughby The Elements of Zion - Old Guardian of Zion

CIWilloughby • AmericanBruja American Bruja: The Los Angeles Cauldron - 17, 18

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AWAITING PARTNER:

MacReader

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RichardPDX

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FIRST CHAPTERS INSTRUCTIONS:

First chapters are extremely important. They need to set the tone and entice the reader to read the rest of the book. Comment on the level of your engagement throughout the chapter. Did you find yourself skimming at times? Or were you hooked the entire way through? How was the author able to keep you engaged and/or how did the author lose you? Min. length: 3 sentences each chapter. Please post each response in the corresponding chapter.

CLIMAX TOPIC INSTRUCTIONS:

Was conflict clearly established, developed and resolved after a gripping climax? These are the works we remember. Think about the tense confrontation ending with these four words of Darth Vader to Luke Skywalker, "No, I am your father." The climax was gripping and the confrontation quite satisfying. Yet sometimes, the conflict is minimally established and resolved, lacking development. Evaluate the story's conflict and its resolution. Min. length: 6 sentences. Please post in the last chapter of this week's assignment.

CHARACTER ANALYSIS INSTRUCTIONS:

After finishing reading a book, you will spend the following five weeks analyzing the five major characters. (If the book does not have five characters, please inform the moderator for the week.) Taking a character each week (starting with the protagonist), analyze the character and his or her arc. Identify the character's strengths and flaws. Indicate how they have affected the outcome of the plot. Examine the character's dialogue. Specify which chapter or chapters were the best-written for the character. If something did not work, make sure to point it out kindly and with at least one suggestion on how to correct problem. Minimum length: 15 sentences. Please post the character analysis in the last chapter of the book.

PLOT ANALYSIS INSTRUCTIONS:

Analyze the plot structure of the book. Identify which chapters include the following plot locations: opening exposition, primary incident, rising action, climax, and conclusion. Not every book has a conclusion. Some end on the climax chapter. Identify how the tension and conflict led to the climax. If there is room for improvement in certain areas, identify them tactfully. If not, explain the techniques the author used to execute the plot. Minimum length: 15 sentences. Please post the plot analysis in the last chapter of the book.

REVIEW INSTRUCTIONS:

Write a short advertisement, including why people should read this book. Min. length: 8 sentences. Please post in the very first chapter of your partner's book. (If you feel so led, send this advertisement as a broadcast message to your followers through your conversation wall.)

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REMINDERS:

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