Ablazed_phoenix

Ended up writing an one shot yet again which I plan on turning into a series, can't really help myself at this point imao
          	would really really really appreciate reviews please
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/344078536?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=Crooning_nightingale

Ablazed_phoenix

Okay soo....Randomly came up with something, very much inspired by @treasure_trove with her beautiful shayari that has no match, and really want reviews
          
          Logo ke hisaab se jeena seekh gaye hum,
          Magar unki baato se apna dil tutne se bachana haar gaye hum
          Chaar logo ki raay par sochte sochte itne kho gaye hum,
          ki khudki khushi ko anjaane mein maar chale hum
          Kya sahi, kya galat, isspar kitna soch pade hum
          Ki humare liye hume kya sahi kya galat lage, yeh sochna hi bhul gaye hum
          Aakhir sabke baare mein soch sochke itne dab gaye hum, 
          ki humari raay humesha ki tarah kahi ghuma baithe hum

Ablazed_phoenix

@khoyehum tysm <333 ani mazha hindi avg aahe honestly imao, pan I try sometimes
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khoyehum

and this is so true, we all so always focus on others 
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khoyehum

this is so good and well written! Hindi kiti chhan ahe tujha
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Creative1Writer

Man i m hopelessly in love with ur writing n books, would be waiting for the updates ....ps a Slytherin here, also don't mind me spamming ur books lmao

Creative1Writer

@Ablazed_phoenix ah then that is good for u xd...ps i hope u would enjoy my works xd
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Ablazed_phoenix

@Creative1Writer and tysmmm! I will definitely try updating my books soon 
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Ablazed_phoenix

@Creative1Writer lmao no not at all! I actually love my notifications being spammed, I'll do it with yours too soon
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treasure_trove

How have you been? 
          Wanted to have a chat but alas wattpad apni aukat pe aa gya and removed the inbox ╥﹏╥
          
          I hope you are well and good❤

treasure_trove

@Ablazed_phoenix 
            Thank you sweetie ❤
            I will come back active once i get settled physically and mentally. 
            And i keep remembering you guys here... 
            It gets so difficult to stay away from your online fam and friends.
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Ablazed_phoenix

@treasure_trove Nahii! You didn't rant a lot! I'm just happy that you spoke to me and felt like sharing all this with me! Teen teen surgeries choti baat nahi hoti, I cannot even imagine what you must've gone through, I cannot tell you how happy I was after seeing your message! And woah! You aren't single anymore? I hope woh joh koi bhi ho, he treats you well and understands you and is willing to stay by you through thick and thin. And i would love to read the poems and shayaris you wrote, I've said this before I'm saying this again, you should publish them all in a book, I'm there to read! Abt tagging you, maine kaha tha na aapko, as long as I'm there on the platform I'll always tag you! I'm not there on instagram yet, idk when will I be or will I be there or not, but if you ever log in to wattpad and feel like tagging, I'm always there! A lots of love to you from my side too <333 I hope aap jaldi theek hoke wapas aajao, aapka besabri se intezaar rahega! 
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treasure_trove

Damn i really ranted a lot... Padh ke reply de kar conversation delete kar dena ╥﹏╥
            I hate wattpad for removing inbox!!
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Ablazed_phoenix

All mumbaikars be wondering wtf just happened after the sky turned grey and it started pouring, ab garmi aur badhegi (╥﹏╥)

Ablazed_phoenix

@khoyehum that's good, Punyat weather mostly changlach asta, ikde paus padla ki ajun garam hota (╥﹏╥)
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khoyehum

It’s pleasant in Pune because of rains nowwww
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Ablazed_phoenix

Trying my hand at the forced marriage genre, but with a Desi, Royal and medieval tadka! I'd really appreciate reviews because I'm absolutely unsure about this.
          
          So here goes nothing! 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/359529892?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Crooning_nightingale

emma7olivia

@Ablazed_phoenix yesss it is I think u shud go ahead with it
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Ablazed_phoenix

@emma7olivia it is? I'm pretty unsure abt this, I mean like...I've got the story plotted n all, but idk....I'm not just sure if it's as good as my other works?
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emma7olivia

@Ablazed_phoenix You shud totally go on with this!!!!
            Damn I'm so exciteddd
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