lolaclouds
Hi Love!
I was wondering if you would possibly check out my story & give some feedback?
Only if you’d like to, but it helps a lot<333
Thank you sm,
I hope you have a good day ♡
ElsiemayKitching
Hiya, I’ve just finished reading both stories and I loved them. The story went on smoothly and everything made sense, I can’t say anything that would make it better. Your a great writer ❤️