@MagicalLarry Hey, it's okay. When you write a book you should write what you want to write. being an author is hard. especially on wattpad because you always want to know if the story is good, if readers likes it. you want them to read what they like but hey, if they don't like your book they can f*ck off. You have to write what you like, you have to write a story you love. the first chapters were perfect, why listen to readers? if you already have a plot in your head, go with it. You have talent, make sure to use it at it's best, okay?