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@SugaPillYoongi thank you that helps a lot

So I've given yours a quick once over, I'll give it a proper read once I get more spare time...
            So far (and this is just from my own perspective and my own personal choice) I like the idea of her being unique, boldly unique at that. I would like to know why though. Historical presinct factures into it I'm guessing? Correct me if I'm wrong.
            
            Also, I'm not a big fan of First Person point of veiw. But I do understand how it is much easier than third person POV. Given that your story is from a few different perspectives however, it may be more beneficial giving Third Person POV a try and using more paragraphs. That way it would be easier for the reader to comprehend rather than having to scroll back to the begining of the chapter for refferal.
            
            Other than that, I can't say much else. ^^
            I hope this helps.

@SugaPillYoongi I am currently in the process of editing it as well as working on chapters on the sequel and doing chapters for [What Lies Beneath The Circus] which Iam most excited about.
            
            I'll be more than happy to! ^^~ Favours never go unpaid with me.

@NamjoonsGirlfriend95 I surely will by today

@oneimaginator hey can I ask a favor from you? Do you mind checking out my book and telling me what you think please? It would mean a lot to me thank you ❤

@oneimaginator dont mention it

@yourhumblehost that's so cool I was a theater kid when I went to high school of two years ago 

@NamjoonsGirlfriend95 I'm apart of marching band drumline and symphonics I play clarinet and synthesiser we have a variety of classic band instruments excluding trombones in marching season.

@yourhumblehost that's cool, your in a band? What kind of band? And what instruments do you guys play?

I also really love your profile pic wylds my bias in mayhem 

Do you mind if I ask you to read my book and tell me what you think?

@Nancy-Sama27 no problem 

@Irisofthewaters  sure