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UR WRITING IS SO GOOD PLEASE NEVER STOP!
I usually hate / never read fanfictions of 12 year old alternatives winning, etc., but idk yours was interesting and I said "fuck it, lets see if this is another meh one" AND I AM NOW SOBBING AND I'M JUST FINISHING CHAPTER 19 AND THE PAIN OF "WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER" AAAAAAA
YOU'RE GREAT AND REALLY INSPIRING, IT'S MOTIVATING ME TO WRITE MY STUFF AGAIN!