PanSexualMarshmellow
If you've read the new Ben pincus story I've been updating recently can you give me some like criticism? I feel like I've messed it up somewhere that's kinda ruined the flow idk. Just need some advice thank u pookies xoxo
PanSexualMarshmellow
@SpikeyTheBookworm okay thank you. And it's cuz I wrote it years ago. It's cringe imp and people were arguing in the comments. It was just bleh
SpikeyTheBookworm
@PanSexualMarshmellow I have some advice. Maybe try to read the story itself? I have a feeling inspiration will come back if you do so. Also, I've got a question? Why was the first book deleted? I'm curious.