Hey! I just wanted to get some feedback. Basically in chapter 42 of the book I'm currently writing which is how you probably know me I mention something little like "HUH" and I wanted some help on whether or not I should change it. Basically I mention like the government a lil. Like it's not a big deal but I feel like it's kinda outta the blue, I mean it gets resolved in the chapter but I was just wondering if I should change the premise or not. I don't really wanna spoil the chapter but it's basically that the government is the reason something isn't happening in the story and I feel like it's kinda strange and I don't want to turn off any readers by them thinking it's really weird so I just want some feedback. Like it's kinda just "wait what!?" but it isn't a major plot point soooo, um where am I going with this. You'll see when I upload it but I kinda just wanted to give a warning so I don't weird any of you guys out, I don't think that it's too big of a deal but I'm also kinda getting in my head about it soo....please validate me I guess
Well that's that. Thank you reading my rant I hope you respond I'll take any feedback really ಥ_ಥ
