LilithFairchild
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Helloo I readed your story in two days hahah. I'm quite addicted to reading and also put some comments of it. I'm sorry if they where too direct, I got kinda nervous reading it but also couldn't stop. I would have sent a private message but it seems that's not possible now. So, I just wanted you to know that as a writter I know how fucking hard is to do a story with full sense and not getting stuck with it, that's why I'm writting this (even if it's kinda weird and I don't write well, but the reality is english is not my language), I do really think this story could be cool as hell and only needs some fixing. I would be very happy if you would want to continue with the story so I'm just offering my help in any case I could give you my opinion in a deeper way as a writer If you like so I may be some help for you to keep going with this novel. Seriously, It's because it's worth the rty of creating something like this and I would LOVE to this being a full novel. So please, please don't give up. With my very sincere admirations and hopes, Lilith.