underthestars232

Hey, I was wondering if you could read my new dystopian book World Left in Pieces. It’s my very first book and I want to improve. Comments and votes and shares would be appreciated. I’m looking for someone that could give me constructive criticism. Thank you so much for your time. 
          
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frarpita

Sorry for popping up✨. Would you mind giving my book a chance. It's a teen fiction slow burn romance. Comments and feedbacks are most appreciated. Here's the link to my book if you would like to give it a shot:-https://www.wattpad.com/story/272309920?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=zylith_starup&wp_originator=3UGctcZcwEJJRKsJm7qhcrP1%2FIY4h1dj2y3O7rjWfWbyHzYUX1KfS5RijUMDv7IaihkXWGZYy%2FghVejIpaHWTEsTZr%2BhFXH5sHTuGjEVJw1H5dW8qATPQ7cbNuJck59M