Hi! I was just looking around on the historical fiction list and stopped by to look at your book then took a look at your profile. I noticed you are very interested in Persian empire. My book just happens to be based on that very time period. I was wondering if you could read it and give me your opinion on it. :) Thank you for your time!!
@ShannonShu98 Hi! Yes I'm really interested in the Persian empire and culture and I loved seeing Farsi quotes in your book! Based on the description, I think the plot will be rly interesting. I also read a few chapters. I'm rly terrible at giving feedback haha but some writing tips I go by are to add a 'hook' that will get to readers from chapter 1, then move the story along in a way that is eye-catching to readers chapter by chapter. Best of luck on your writing journey!