Title: Empire:playing dice
Genre:Fantasy
Author:Eelphen
Yeah..........another one
So this one is quite astonishing
Author and readers do u all think this is like Fantasy i feel like it is leaning more on historical fiction your thoughts >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
Your first chapter was nice tho I kinda felt like I saw too much characters thereEelphen
And also in most of your chapters they are too clusterd I think your should try to do some spacing or make them into paragraphs because when I was reading it felt like when I read I line there is a full stop like every where.
But your book is good like your plot I guess it is only the spacing that I see as your major flaw
Your book cover with the princess❤❤❤love it so I would give that a 7.5
Your book Also a 7.5
Book description would be a 6.5
I do hope you like this review
Sorry for my late post and reply
You all voteEelphen
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