Title: Indian bahu
Genre: Romance
Author:Harshywrites05
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Ok first of I like you characters profile it's nice
On to the main book
So as I was reading I came across some places where some word where spelt incorrectly (might have been a typo but check it out).
Also your punctuation I think in some places they were needed.
In this your book I feel like the time skip became too much I mean the characters didn't even get to know themselves (yeah it was an arranged marriage but nevertheless) I think the characters should have spent more time getting to know each other. In at least the first 2 -5 chapters .
Well it is your plot but I think it needs some little touches .
For the book I would rate it a 5.5
For your book cover I would rate it a 4.5 (basically I feel it is not really wow)
For your book description I would give that a 6 it's not perfect but it's good .
I feel like your book would be really good when it is done and I hope you check out some of your errors.
And I know you would do great ❤❤❤
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