Ch. 12

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                                              Devin POV 


The door to the room opens. Showing this crazy guy or aka my dad He told me that He was my father and my mom hid us from him. I can see why. 

"I brought you some dinner." He says using candle light to light up the darkness he won't use actual electric because this place is abandoned and doesn't want to draw attention. 

"Please just let me go." I say as I try yanking the chain around my ankle 

"Why? I'm taking care of you unlike that ungrateful mother of yours." He sneers

Tear falling down my cheeks clearly scared. 

"Now sweetheart what did I tell you about crying." He says grabbing my face harshly 


                                        Derek POV 


We were sitting around the conference table trying to figure why this unsub would take Devin. My phone rings. I put it on speaker. 

"Hey baby girl you're on speaker." I say 

"So it took some major hacking and my potential skills but I was able to unseal the file. I found Devin's father. Dylan Scott, ex Marine. He was dishonorably discharged. Had some major authority problems. He actually beat his commanding officer to a pulp just because and I quote he gave me a look. He's got major anger issues. The list goes on and on." Garcia says

"Where is he now Garcia?" Reid says 

"That's the thing, He just vanished no paper trail, No bank card. No house nothing." She says 

"What about properties he used to own, Or maybe still owns." Rossi asked 

"There was a hunting cabin he owned but it was deemed unfit to live in major case of mold." She says 

"Thanks Garcia, Give us that address." Hotch says 

"Coming at ya." she says and hangs up

We pile in the SUV'S with our vests and guns.

And when we pull up and are in shock. 


                               Devin POV 


"You don't appreciate anything I do for you! You're just like your mother!" He yells backhanding me. 

In the process knocks a oil lamp to the ground the lamp shatters and the fire lights like a wild fire. Blocking him from me The fire separating us. 

"Help me!" I yell but he just stands there and then runs out only to bring back gasoline. pouring it everywhere. 

"Might as well get rid of this place." He says 

leading the fire towards the main room. I hear the front door slam. 

I try yanking my ankle free. But it's chained to the bed frame. 

I start crying. The smoke getting so dense. 

"Help! Help me!!" I yell Not knowing someone is going to hear me the crackling of the fire everywhere 

I hear a window break the glass breaking. 

"Devin!! Devin can you hear me!?" I hear Derek. 

"Derek Help me!" I yell as I start coughing

I see him jump though the fire.

"I'm stuck." I say showing him my ankle

"It's okay I'm going to get you out." He says. 

He grabs his gun, Aiming for the middle of the chain and shoots the chain breaking it in half. 

"Come on." He picks me up 

"Whatever you do try not to breathe in the smoke." He says 

I nodded and he takes off running with me in his arms. One of the beams falls down right in front of us. I scream. 

He kicks a weak wall and he jumps out of the cabin since the fire weakened the wall. 

"Help we need help." Derek says I am still coughing hysterically Having trouble catching my breath. 

I am laid on a gurney in an ambulance. A mask is put over my nose and mouth. I watch as firefighters were trying to put out the fire. I see Derek talking to me but I'm not making out the words. 

My eyelids were just too heavy as I fall into darkness. 


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⏰ Last updated: Jul 11, 2023 ⏰

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