The main character dies but is reborn in a world of magic simple plot follow the Mc on his journey
All characters are my mine also first story so do tell me how to improve
Third person pov The music stopped and the two that were dancing also stoped the audience was shocked and silent but slowly they all started to clap unconsciously yet that was not what caused the two of them to have those bright smiles in their face Menma pov The music stopped and so did we I was panting it was a long dance tiring as well but I had fun in it a thrill to dance with her and exciting.I looked down to see how she's doing she was also panting with sweat traveling down her face and her eyes seemingly shining even though there was dim lighting and one hell of a big smile on her face filled with happiness and excitement. Looking at her and seeing how relaxed and cheerful she is made me crack a smile as well tho I didn't know I did Nari pov The music stopped I was exhausted but excited because after this plans can go into motion with almost no problems and I was happy that even tho this is a fake marriage my parents efforts didn't go to waste. I looked up to see Menma smiling at me even tho it was small he was which was rare these past couple of weeks since his mother died he had been trying to busy himself not to think about it seeing him like that made the smile that I didn't even know was there widen even more Third person pov After the two of them snapped out of there trance they bowed and head off to a balcony to relax but that was short lived as people now started to congratulate them forcefully mind you and also asking for favors as it won't hurt for people to have them on their good sides even though the both of them could see through them and when it hit midnight everybody went home The next day Menma pov I woke up and went to the bathroom to get ready and then remembered yesterday so now for the first time in both lives I'm engaged didn't expect it to go that easily thought that asshole of a father would have made it harder for me but he really doesn't care well might as well use that against him. After putting on a white shirt and black pants since I'm not going anywhere I headed down for breakfast and saw Nari about to start eating "Not gonna wait for ur fiancé to come down before u start eating?" "You take to long to get down" "Well how do you think this hair keeps shinning and stays soft" "Mine does and I don't take that long" "You have it easier because you have been doing since you were a child" " you weren't?" "No when I was a kid all I did was wash it with some soap and water" "Well look at that you learn something new everyday" "Yeah so what were your plans for today anyways?" "Got nothing so I was thinking of training and practicing magic" "Then let me join you well you?" "Sure you have good moves and also good magic control even though your at level 2" "3 I got one up yesterday" "When?" "When we were getting congratulated I don't like doing nothing while I can be doing something" "You really need to know when to do things" "What nobody realized I don't see a problem" "What ever let's just go" "Hey hey let me finish my breakfast first" "*sigh* hurry up also when was your stuff supposed to get ready" " A weef from now" " a what" "*gulp* week" "Sallow the talk would you" "Sorry anyways let's get going" And so my life was peaceful for a week for once and I had fun training and going on occasional dates to keep up the act. And so the day that I get my gear came and well let's just say I was nervous. "Why are you so nervous?" "Come on don't you remember the swords he made and he said he didn't take those to seriously and he said he'll be serious about mine so I'm nervous and excited" "Still don't understand" "You well when it happens to you" "Yea sure let's go in " "Hey wait up seriously" And so we headed in "*breath in* HEY NELY WERE HERE" " MY EARS WORK FINE YOU NOISY KID" "So how is my gear u drunk" "Done it looks simple but it's enchanted with good ol'magic" "Nice" He then hands me a small package and a Katana we take them "So how much for the gear?" "As long as you don't come I having it broken down without a good reason nothing" Nari pov "No no we can't we're paying-" "Sure thing thanks old man" "Menma he put time in it" "Let me tell you something when you get an offer to get something for free and you need it take it" "What why?" "Well if there offering then they don't need anything in return no one offers something out of the kindness of there Heart there's always a catch" "Hah Listen to him more" "So what's the catch then" "If anybody ask you where you got them you tell them from and if they laugh then act serious to make them believe" "And business will be booming is that it" "Hahaha never thought a noble now's that word" "Well whatever let's go Nari" Menma pov "Then are you helping me cause u want something in return" "No I'm helping cause we have the same goal and my end goal also involves this" "Well as long as you help I ain't complaining" "Then let get back so I can try this on and I can head out" "Sure let's go" At Mansion Well I gotta say even if it's simple it looks good I like the mask a lot to. What I was wearing was a tight black shirt along with a bit of baggy pants and black shoes with red lacing add a black jacket with it and you have the fit. The mask was a half mask it covered the bottom half and was just look at the pic and the Katana was pitch black blade handle everything it even had a feeling that this was a drop from a final boss or a finely crafted piece which I wasn't expecting him to make it look good.
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(These is the kit couldn't bother find a hoodie or jacket so let your imagination wold on how that looks) "Menma hurry up how long does it take to put it on" "One sec gotta put the hair dye on" White hair isn't common what's common is brown so that's the dye we have and well it's okay I guess anyways let's go down so I don't get killed by her. "So how does it look?" "If it was white hair you would have looked better." "Yea thought so" "Well then you ready" "Yup then I'm off" "Don't die and do good work" "Yea yea" And so I went out well more like jumped out of the mansion since I can't be seen leaving with this attire as people can make rumors and so on anyways I was now infront of the adventure building and well it looked a lot like the ones in games and manga a grand entrance and filled with people downing beer and fighting and so I made my way to the receptionist she was a young woman maybe early 20s and low and behold brown hair black eyes and well let's say eye candy she was wearing a red top and black pants (I'm lazy deal with it if you have better outfits tell me) "What brings you here today sir?" I smirked under the mask this was a time I have been waiting the prime reason this world excites me is all the fantasy so with that I said "I would like to register to be an adventurer" 1.3k words also this was supposed to be released earlier but I kinda deleted the chapter and had to re write it
