I went back and read the whole story. I find it to be way to fast in the last few chapters. I'm sorry that you guys have already went through the whole book. But I will add chapters so you guys can get to know these characters more. And once I feel like the story is perfect with that, I am going to add on the second story(That I am working on as well) to this one so "Alone" is a longer story instead of two short ones. So please hang with me here. I will try to update it as often as I can.
I found my Brandon. So I am hoping this wouldn't be too hard for me.
I was also thinking about not killing Lydia??? And then completely changing Alone again while adding it??
Just because these characters are like based on how I feel about myself and someone else. And since I have my brandon it feels weird to kill Lydia because her dying was because of someone I thought was my brandon. I don't know. Tell me what you think and bear with me
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Alone
Teen FictionHave you ever felt so empty? Or so emotionally hurt that it became physical? Have you ever felt comfort in tearing into yourself? Have you ever felt so alone, though surrounded by others *Being extended*
