6. A Dive

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It's been quite a while since I felt alive
Hit my peak, failed to speak, and started to jive
Just going and flowing with water after taking a deep dive

Unaffected
Can't give a damn
Disconnected
Emotions stuck in a traffic jam

Feeling nothing as if I am dead
Appealing to the god overhead
Dealing with only grief and dread
Kneeling in front of the pointless war ahead

Maybe it's for my own good
If I don't feel joy, can't get hurt
I can't be misunderstood
If I leave all this and dare to desert

They say everything happens for good
What on Earth is the point of this then?
Why to sacrifice joy for falsehood?
If I won't feel anything ever again

To taste the holy drops of bliss
I am ready to pay struggle as a price
About sweet times, I reminisce
When I felt both nasty and nice, it really was paradise

What if it's been a while since I felt alive?
Hit a peak, a dip broke my streak but I did revive
I won't go with the flow of water but bring a tsunami, make every wave remember that dive
And witness how even on the seabed a rebel can thrive

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Hey there depressed souls! I am back with another poem on Saturday. This is one of my favorites because I think it's a perfect blend of dark thoughts and motivation. I love how the poem transitioned from a depressed one to an encouraging one. I am really proud of how it turned out in the end.

Let me know your views regarding it cause it's you guys I write poems for and I would be happy to improve my poetry skills with the help of your honest feedback. I would highly appreciate your engagement.

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