Introduction:
Narcus is a oneshot BTS fanfic written by EllaOraios. This author won second place in the Eclipse Awards, oneshot category, and it was absolutely deserved. Rereading this story again for this review was a treat. The way this author captures the personalities of the BTS members, especially Jin's, is fascinating, and you should definitely check their profile out!
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Long Feedback (5-8 Sentences):
Easily my favorite part of this story is Jin because of the way he is written and how he brings laughter out of me, which is super rare. There are very, very few times where I laugh from something written in a book; for me, I need to see the comedy being performed in order to laugh, so it's hard for me to laugh simply based on written text. Jin is super true to himself in this, and it makes me engaged in the narrative due to how accurately you write him. However, my enjoyment goes beyond that because the rest of the oneshot is solid as well with the interesting plot that had no holes or inconsistencies that I noticed (which is impressive considering the genre you wrote in).
I also did a bit of celebration while reading this oneshot because you are one of the few authors I have seen on this site that uses dialogue tags correctly. No, like really. I can probably count on one hand how many have done them right.
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Summary:
- Live laugh love Jin
- Impressive plot with solid worldbuilding
- DIALOGUE TAGS ARE DONE RIGHT 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺💜💜💜💜💜🤭🤭🤭🤭
- A fun story with interesting concepts and a great writing style
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Overall:
Narcus is an adorable short story with a fun, uplifting writing style that will put you in a good mood. If you're looking for a story that's an easy read with interesting ideas and colorful writing, then you should absolutely check out Narcus and support this underrated author!
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I will never get tired of this cute lil oneshot! Jin is the best, and you're inspiring me to read more Jin fanfics. I'm so happy I got to read it again. When I get on break from college, I'd love to read more work by you. I can't wait to check out more great stories, and to everyone reading this, be sure to go check this author out since they are very talented and have a bright future!
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