A little update

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PLEAAAASE READ

Hey guys and girls :)

A couple of things to be updated on:

1. Kate recently turned 18, she's 4 months pregnant and expecting a boy

2. I've changed Jared's age to 29 as per a lot of suggestions that 24 wasn't so old

3. I've tried my hardest to edit and make the timelines make sense

I know I haven't posted in a while (I'm sorry), the next chapter is after this little message (yay)

A few of you guys were saying how the story was all over the place and the grammar errors were annoying and a couple of other things. I've edited the whole story from the first chapter (I've tried my hardest, there might still be a few) and added a few extra things to make the story sound more 'professional' as a few of you have suggested. I'm not a professional author guys so it won't be perfect, as most of you know I'm a university student so my writing won't be perfect.

Anyway, I hope you enjoy the next chapter :)

love always,

Val

xo

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