Changes in the story.

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4-2-24


Hi everyone, I decided to revise chapters, and change everything I seem cringe now. I'm reading a lot of stories that are like this one and trying to see if I can improve my story style. 

This is just for anything that I change in any chapter. 


Changes: Vol 1 Chapter 22, The crown prince.

-14-2-23- Old vers: ' I cannot disobey his orders there's nothing I can do' 

-4-2-24- Updated vers: 'The hell is this bitch doing right now?' Kei thought, irritated at the man above him. 

(4.2.24)

Changes: Vol 1. Chapter 23

Previously: Vol 1 chapter 23: Agreement (End of Vol 1) 

"Sighing, kei did as the prince said, wrapping his legs around the upper ladders waist."

"Good boy.." The prince praised. Lowering his head, Masahiko (crown prince) kissed Kei's temple. "I love it when my wife obeys my commands" He sighs."

"I only obeyed your command because you're the crown prince!"

(4.2.24)

Changes: Vol 2. chapter 24 Regret 

Previously: 

Vol.2 Chapter 24 Regret

 Updated vers: I changed everything. 

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