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Jannat POV

I reached the park to take my two mischievous kids at home.dont know why they can't understand things at once when said.today they both will be getting punished.i reached near them and by looking at them.i can say that these two are scared.

Jannat: I want you both at home in a minute.

I said and went home. I cold hear footsteps following me.today zayyan said that he will be coming soon before lunch itself.i am just waiting for him to tell him about his kids doing.we entered the house.

Rayyan: mumm- (rayyan tried to speak but I cut him off)

I said: shut up!!!not a word ....just wait until your baba comes home then you see what happens to you today...

I turned my attention towards innara.

I said: how dare you go out even after I said you are not allowed????

Innara: mumma please we did nothing big that you are scolding so much!!!

I said: without informing me and going out is not an issue according to you right???

Innara: offcourse it's not an issue...now stop scolding otherwise I will complain to baba about you!!!(Loudly)

Before I could reply I heard zayyan's loud voice.

Zayyan: INAARA(LOUDLY)

innara flinched at his loud voice.. offcourse because he never raised his voice at her.i know why he did it today because he doesn't like it when our kids misbehave with me.zayyan came towards us.

Zayyan: who allowed you to talk to.your mom in this tone??(Angrily)

Innara: baba mumma was scolding me that's why I did.(Tears in eyes)

When I scold her it doesn't affect her but her baba didn't say anything yet and she already started crying,I thought

Zaayan: whatever it is you are not allowed to talk to your mom like this.Go and kneel in the corner by facing the wall.

Innara: baba???

Zayyan: now inaara!!!(Sternly)

Innara tears that she was holding in her eyes fell down.she went near the wall took the position that zayyan said.all this time rayyan was standing near sofa only.

Zayyan: why was she misbehaving??

I filled him with every information and he got very angry.i know he is angry because of kids disobeying me and then misbehaving.he looked towards rayyan angrily.

Jannat POV ended

Authors POV

Zayyan: how dare you go out without informing???(Angrily)

Rayyan doesn't reply.

Zayyan: I am asking you something???(Loudly)

Rayyan: baba we wanted to pl-(rayyan was cutted off by a hard slap from zayyan)

Zayyan slapped his son on his cheeks.tears started to flow from his eyes.he went up and again came down within five mins.he came with a cane in his hand.jannat went to her room not wanting to witness all this.

Zaayan: come and stand in front of me(angrily)

Rayyan shook his head.

Zayyan: if I will come to you then you won't like the consequences!!

Rayyan: baba i won't disobbey mumma ever(cried)

Zaayan: rayyan stand in front of me(loudly)

Inaara was hearing all this and crying.she never knew that his baba is so strict with her brother.a sob escapes her mouth.zayyan looks at her and said

Zayyan: go to my room and kneel there.

Innara runs to her parents room.when rayyan doesn't come to zayyan.he himself goes near. A hard whack landed on rayyan's back with the cane.rayyan felt the pain on his back and tried to rub his back to soothe the pain but immediately another whack landed on his thighs.
He cried louder due to the hits.

Rayyan: ba..ba I am s...sorry(cried while rubbing the spot where he got hit)

Zayyan: next time when I say something I want you to hear me out!!I told you thrice to come and stand near me!!(Angrily)

Rayyan continued crying.

Zayyan: palms out..you are getting 5 hits on your each palm.(Sternly)

Raayan: ba..ba please!!

Zayyan: if you don't want me to increase your punishment then I want your palms out within a second!!(Angrily)

Rayyan hesitated but brings his left plan out.

Hit📏
He cried loudly to the hits.
After the first hit he took his hand back.

Zaayan: if you will take your hand back now then you will be getting 10 on your each hand!!(Warned)

Rayyan puts his hand in front and he gets more 4 hard hits with cane.

HIT📏
HIT📏
HIT📏
HIT📏

He took his hand back and started rubbing it.he was crying continuously.

Raayan: ahhhh....ba..ba please ....I am sorry.....I won't.this ..ag..ain...please...baba

Zayyan ignored his please and gave him hitz on another hand.

HIT📏

rayyan: ahhhh...(Cried)

HIT📏
HIT📏
HIT📏

He took his hand back before zayyan can give him one more hit.

Zaayan: now you are getting two extra hits..I warned you not to take your hands back!!(Angrily)

Rayyan: no ...no ...ba..ba please....it's pa... paining(cried)

Zayyan held his hand tightly and gave him more 3 hits

HIT📏
HIT📏
HIT📏

Rayyan took his hands back and cried harder .

Zaayan; stop crying and kneel down by facing the wall and hold your ears.

Rayyan took his position not wanting to increase his father's anger anymore.he called innara down from his room.hearing zayyan's call she immediately came down with jannat.
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