Mana Ke Hum Yaar Nahi

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Story's name : Mana Ke Hum Yaar nahi

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Story's name : Mana Ke Hum Yaar nahi...
Author's name : AVik108

Let me start with the description.
I mean the description is quite good. Its indirect but serves just the plot of the story. It is to the point and simple. Which I really liked. The cover is great!

 The cover is great!

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For the story.... The plot of the story is really good and interesting. I would request you to update it.
The overall plot is really interesting. I think the chapters could be a little longer like 50-100 words more.
2 points which attracted me:
1) Your style of writing. I mean your vocabulary is really good. Also some of the places you've written in such a way, that it grows interest in the readers and they want to know what would happen next. This style is very much required. This is a plus for me.
2) there were no Grammatical errors. You have written in Hindi and in English, but I think there are barely any grammatical errors.
I really liked the book. Hopefully you update soon.
I would rate this book 3/5
I think this book is worth reading. So guys go and follow her right now!!!
Hopefully I wasn't rude.
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