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Editing the story you wrote as a kid is a difficult task.
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Elena's POV
The door opened suddenly and I was expecting Dad but a familiar arms held me tight as I was pulled towards a muscular chest.
"Scott" I said trying to breathe through his bone crushing hug.
"Ele" he whispered and checked all over my body. He pulled me into a hug again and kissed my forehead.
"Oh my god, I was really scared. Who is the man? I swear I'll kill-" he said angrily.
"He's my-" I was saying when I saw dad.
"Dad" I said.
"Dad?" Scott asked.
"Yes he's my dad. Now you know that he's my dad and I am safe. Now get lost." I said angrily.
"Is he your friend?" Dad asked.
"No he isn't." I said.
"Then I would like you to keep your hands off my daughter." Dad said glaring at him.
"Hello Mr. Carter. I'm Scott." He introduced himself.
"It was a misunderstanding Sugar" he whispered.
"I don't care" I said.
"Sir you're needed. There's an emergency." A man said to dad.
He gave him some kind of look.
"I'll be back Ele." He said and patted my head.
"I would appreciate if you maintain a distance with her." Dad said and went away.
Scott turned towards me and instantly pulled me into his arms.
"I swear it was a misunderstanding. I thought it was you. And why you were with that idiot?" Scott asked angrily.
"Who?" I asked.
"Your best friend." He said and his jaw clenched.
"He's not an idiot. You're an idiot." I yelled at him.
"Okay then,I am an idiot." He said and pushed me on the couch and jumped on top of me.
"I am idiot." He teased.
"Yes, you are." I said looking anywhere but him.
He smashed his lips on mine. His one arm held me tightly by my waist. He cupped my face. He pulled me even more closer desperately and bit on my lower lip asking for entrance. Our tongue danced together in sync.
I pulled away. We sat with each other cuddling on the couch.
"What happened? You seem to be lost in your deep thoughts." He asked as he looking into my eyes.
"Nothing" I said and smiled at him
"Hey, I wanna ask you something." He said.
"Yes?" I said.
"Will you go on a date with me?" He asked and smiled at him.
"Yes." I replied happily.
He grinned and pulled me closer to kiss me.
I told Dad I would be out for shopping with my best friend.
"I need your help." I said.
"Okay...bud fisd I haw to..." She said with her mouth stuffed with pizza.
"You eat like a pig." I said.
"Damnit. We have only two hours." She yelled.
"Stop yelling. It's enough." I said.
"I have to chose a dress for you and then I have to do your makeup. I have so much to do." She explained.
She threw many clothes at me.
"What are you doing?" I said and rolled my eyes at her.
"Choosing something good for you to wear." She said as she started throwing some more dresses at me.
For a few minutes, it went like-
"This"
"Nah"
"This is hot."
"Are you crazy?"
"You can-"
"Never"
"This"
"No"
After few minutes
"Oh my god this is perfect." She said pointing towards a dress.
It was a baby blue dress. It was short and it hugged my body perfectly.
She took half an hour to put makeup on my face.
"You look hot Ele. I'd totally date you if I were a guy." She said grinning excitedly at me.
"Look yourself in the mirror." She said and I smiled at my reflection. I was satisfied.
"Thank you Anne." I said and hugged her.
"Go girl make some babies." She said and pushed me out of my room.
The doorbell rang.
"He's here." I said.
"I want each and every detail." She said and winked at me.
I rolled my eyes.
"I'm going." I said and went downstairs to open the door.
"Sure, I'll be waiting." She said.
Lucy was not at home. She went to Paris with some of her friends and Anne was staying with me for a week as vacations were starting from tomorrow. I informed dad about it.
I went downstairs. He was wearing a black shirt.
That's my weakness.
"You look beautiful." He said moving his eyes all over my body.
"You don't look bad yourself." I teased.
"You checking me out says otherwise." He said with a smirk.
"Where are we going?" I asked with curiousity.
"It's a surprise." He said and smiled at me.
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