AMA revisited

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As you guys know, this is the rewritten version of AMA. I had decided a long time ago I wanted to rewrite it, and only recently had I felt inspired enough to start. And I'm deciding to leave up the old version for the sake of the readers.

Anyways, you'll see both minor and major changes along the way, but I tried to keep the story line as close as possible to the original. There were A LOT of plot holes in the first edition, so naturally I had a lot of fixing to do.  My main focus is to clean it up and make it easier to read.

ALSO, keep in mind that I had to take a 300K+ word story and cut it down to a manageable (and publishable) size for marketing and commercial reasons. The new version will be about 95,000 words.

I'm asking you guys to go into this expecting to read a brand new story. I promise it'll make the experience so much better.

But that's enough of my rambling, hope you guys enjoy!

Lauryn

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