I definitely changed perspectives here. I'd actually planned on ending it at a much later place, but this chapter was rather long with what was in the chapter. I'm thinking of breaking this chapter up into two chapters, but I'll worry about that tomorrow. It will mean adding a little bit of length at the end, but this would also solidify the ending. The tone's shifted because of the POV shift as well, but I think something as sad as this needs a bit of humor to break the tension up. Yeah - I think I will expand on it a bit and break it into more than one chapter tomorrow.
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Open Novella Journal
RandomI'm keeping track of my notes and reflecting on my writing process regarding my Open Novella writing.
