Ouch. I honestly didn't intend for the entire chapter to be about how annoying Lance is. I wanted Rachel to have a more positive attitude towards her brother because he is her brother. She comes across as rather bitter towards him, but in truth I think she is bitter towards him from what we see in eighth season.
I think I'll go back and add in some positive experiences now because I think it is possible for her to have some good memories of Lance, but I don't know if it will work.
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Open Novella Journal
RandomI'm keeping track of my notes and reflecting on my writing process regarding my Open Novella writing.
