Fixed. The forth chapter is now broken up into chapter four and five. I added in a bit more letting those who don't know the VLD fandom about Shiro's genius status. Thinking back on both chapters since I edited the one into two chapters, I think there are some people who won't be pleased that Lance is acting like a jerk, but then again these people are likely the ones who claimed Keith was the bully to Lance when in reality it was the other way around. It's pretty sad when I know they were really good friends in DotU, but they're not in VLD. Sure, they don't have the issues they had at the beginning, but I wouldn't call them friends either.
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Open Novella Journal
RandomI'm keeping track of my notes and reflecting on my writing process regarding my Open Novella writing.