The story has been revised! Word count is 155k (I deleted 80k words)
I'm still over Query length by 50k words (bummer) but that's a third of the story. .__.
If you read through it, let me know what you think could be taken out if you see anything</3
-----> Chapter lengths are landing around 3200 for the first two, but average chapter length is 1800-2500 for each chapter (word counts are on the bottom of each chapter)
-----> Some characters and motivations are changing. (IE bringing some less featured characters more into the story and straightening out others who had conflicting parts)
-----> The end wont be changing. I'm mostly just removing my main POV going to school and bringing the female POV closer to the story start <3
Thanks for reading lovelys and let me know that you think! ^.^
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LCP : Last Chance Penitentiary
General FictionIf you're looking for an adventure in the morally grey, and a crash course of the human condition, this is the story for you! What is good and evil? Where is that line drawn, and who decides that? Packed with humor, danger, feels, and awkward relati...
