Shock! The Real Daughter Made the Transmigrator Girl Cry

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Summary:
In her last life, Jiang Changning discovered that she was a fake daughter when the real daughter she had never met came to meet the family. Because of Jiang Luojin’s schemes, everyone’s treatment towards her in Hou’s mansion turned bad.

Mother Jiang: You are the one who caused my A Luo to suffer so much!

Brother: A Luo is your younger sister, what’s wrong with leaving the marriage to her? You owe her all this!

Fiance: The only one I love in my heart is A Luo, and it’s all because of your wishful thinking, Jiang Changning, you will never be a humble person!

The betrayed Jiang Changning died on the day Jiang Luo got married.

Once she woke up, she found that she was back in time when Jiang Luo came to

introduce herself. And she suddenly can hear the conversation between Jiang Luo and the “system”.

The other party has been robbing her luck through this system!

The only thing that can counterattack this is the Banquet King who saved her in her previous life!

So…

Banquet King: What are you doing? Stop hugging my thigh!!!

Jiang Changning: It’s just… very comfortable!

Review:
I kinda want to rate this 4/5 but toward the end, it feels the story goes downhill. Overall I enjoyed reading this story and has 1 tears moment. Other than that side characters seems bland and no depth.
MC rebirth to when OFL just arrived to her home. MC can hear OFL and her system conversation so she dodge OFL schemes. OFL tried to capture MC luck, so she make MC lost favor. MC brother and mother affection goes up and down on early phase. Only OML directly captured 100%. MC broke her engagement with OML. OML mother dislike OFL because she got intimate with OML before he broke his engagement with MC.
ML is unfavored son, his mother died early. She was abused by the emperor. Then ML use his strength to gain power. The emperor use him as shield to protect the crown prince. He favoured ML so all assassination went to him. Not much about politic and background story. ML met MC when he was a child. MC broke empress flower and blame it to ML. She felt guilty and gave some food to ML. ML took her to climb a wall. MC fell down and hurt her head. She forgot about ML. ML felt guilty and love MC for years.
MC dream her first life after her death. ML went crazy and kill OFL. OML was tortured and crippled. ML also has system but he is not bounded. ML use his life to make MC rebirth, that's why MC can hear ML system.
Current life ML doesn't have past memory, he doesn't know that MC can hear his system. He often ask his system how to get close to MC.
There are a lot filler, it's really stand out that the part is unimportant. OFL paid a couple to become MC real parent, in reality they are a kidnapper that sold girls to brothel. MC was kidnapped and brought to brothel. The brothel owner, turns out a man who loved ML mother. He works with a prince to kill current emperor. He plan to die together with the emperor and the prince to pave way for ML. Then the emperor got heavy injury, the brothel owner died along with the rebel prince.
Another filler that's really make me wonder what's the plot's function. ML went to a war, MC saw a familiar back. She met a man from first life. No explanation who he is or what's their relationship. It's just MC is afraid of him. The man suddenly meet up with OFL and ask her if she still want to kill MC. It looks like he remembered the first life and loved OFL. But then no further interaction between him and OFL. He met MC again and scheme her. MC was attacked by wolf, the man threaten MC. MC jump from cliff, the man follow suit and save her. Both of them went missing for half a month. And surprisingly no one bother it, it just MC mother and brother got worried and sad. MC met ML, for information the location is near capital. ML was at border that took 1 month journey. He then run fast after he heard MC went missing. After he sent back MC, he went along to capital. ML tortured the man. The man request to meet MC for last time. He just said MC should be careful with OFL before he died. So there's no plot purpose or new info. The man also rebirth but within some chapters, he already died...
Toward the end it seems rushed. A lot unused filler and OFL defeated by her own mistakes or lies. MC didn't do anything to her. Repeatedly it was said MC want to revenge and kill OFL but then there's no action.
The ending is ML easily kill the emperor, he married MC. OFL was killed by her own system. OML become crippled and waste.

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