If you don't use quotation marks get the fuck out
I cannot stand reading something without quotes (") USE THEM
Ex. I waked over to lollipop and said hi . Lollipop says hi cherry how are you. I'm good I reply and then we turn to walk to class. Are you going to the party this weekend. I'm not sure yet you I ask sitting down. I don't know either lollipop paused omg there's homework what homework . Relax copy mine and then we can talk about the party SILENCE the teacher yells
I'm sorry whet
Don't do that shit and use punctuation!!! I can't read anything that is a really long run on sentence wtf
And don't write "idk" "wtf" "omg" OR ANY ABBREVIATIONS
Also this isn't dialogue;
Jerk: Hey
Bitch: sup
Jerk: nothin just trying to work on this history work
Bitch: same
{get the reference???}
I click out of that shit so fast.
One more thing after dialogue there is supposed to be a break.
(Using basic over used names)
Correct:
"Hey what's up Carly?" I ask sitting next to her.
Carly shrugs, "Attempting this awful homework." Then she slumps on to the desk in defeat.
"That's fair." I respond.
Wrong:
"Hey what's up Carly?" I ask sitting next to her. Carly shrugs, "Attempting this awful homework." Then she slumps on to the desk in defeat. "That's fair." I respond.
This makes it so hard to read omfg
YOU ARE READING
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