So I see this all the time and it's annoying af
let's go with a girl and boy, so they are together and they get into an argument blah blah blah
Why tf does he say hurtful things that makes the girl cry and a day later he goes "sorry" and all is right?
If you are making an argument and someone says something hurtful they should not be forgiven in 3 seconds
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Your arguments/fights don't need caps
Deadass I can't stand scrolling and whatnot and the whole thing is in caps. You can express yelling in other ways.
Ex.
"I CANT BELIVE YOU DID THAT! HOW COULD YOU? I TRUSTED YOU AND NOW YOU BROKE MY TRUST HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO FORGIVE YOU I CANT BELIVE THIS!" I yelled.
Plz dont^
"I can't believe you did that! How could you? I trusted you and now you broke my trust how am I supposed to forgive you I can't believe you!" I yell angry and hurt.
Eh run on sentence but not everything needs to be in caps.
CHEATING
If you are gonna make someone cheat make an actual reason. They wouldnt be totally in love then sleep with someone else...
The drunk thing does work but if the drunk person remembers and really loves them maybe they should fess up.
Your OC can be the one cheating too. Like there aren't perfect...
If someone cheats and they are forgiven a chapter later bye
No one should get away cheating that easy
And it's NOT HEALTHY
YOU ARE READING
How NOT to write Fandom Stories
FanfictionStop writing like that.... Just some things and stuff about fanfiction I've seen a couple of these with certain fandoms and I love those stories and have my own things to say because it's so hard finding many good stories for something. ~general t...
