A couple things here....
Why do relationships start in like the 5th chapter?????
Why is there no build up??
I'm not saying get together on the 50th chapter but there has to be a middle of it
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Why is the female in the males lap
Ok realtionshipping I understand
But do you not want to sit on a fucking seat or anything for like 2 seconds
Wtf I was just reading a fic and she only sat in his lap or just all up on him
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That ^^brings me to this:
Your two characters need space
I stg they always cuddling on the couch or leaning all up on eachother or in eachothers space
Can y'all not have 2 ppl sit next to eachother and hold hands while with friends???
Why can they not hangout with friends?
I always see females asking the male for permission to hang out with male friends
And like 1 person shouldn't feel so guilty about hanging out with friends not the person they are dating
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They also don't have to make out all the time
Don't get me wrong when your OTP kisses and you squeal that's great I do it too
But your OTP or your OC or whatever don't need to kiss between every sentence
It's not needed
YOU ARE READING
How NOT to write Fandom Stories
FanfictionStop writing like that.... Just some things and stuff about fanfiction I've seen a couple of these with certain fandoms and I love those stories and have my own things to say because it's so hard finding many good stories for something. ~general t...
