Modern family: Addition

To be continued

Kame Hame Ha would have its debut and I opted to keep that name as it is perfect in my opinion.

Emperor Pilaf would be introduced earlier and wouldn't be abrupt additions to the climax.

It is important to note that Pilaf has always made use of robot mechs and it would be a shame to not include something merchandisable into the story.

Pilaf's machines could very well be a toyline like Iron Man's Mark suits.

The Boss Rabbit that can turn people into carrots would also serve as a preliminary introduction to magic lore. Oolong's and Puar's shapeshifting is just a trace of it.

Bobby D, Bibby D, and Buu needed a foreshadowing to not make them too abrupt as the original.

That about wraps it up for the first arc with the ragtag Dragonball team disbanding and heading to new adventures.

I stayed through with Toriyama's plot for the first part because its success has some basis to ground himself.

Even if I opted to tone down some of the sexual innuendos, I still kept most of it as it was an appeal for the young Goku stories. It could be said that lewdness is what brings out the comedy to the series.

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The rest of my outlining is more on the next arcs as I went on with my story expansion plan.

For the one year that the Dragonball is recharging, Goku and his friends has a lot of stories to be tapped.

Training arcs, dealing with complications of Shenron wishes, Martial Arts Tournaments, and just the establishment of the power dynamics.

I had used quite a thinking to muster as many martial arts moves to expand on the story and how they compare against each other.

Solar Flare, flight, Destructo Disc, KameHameHa, eight-arm fist, and all that can't just be the few named techniques that originate from Earth.

I have also formed expansive arcs for that lead to the next Shenron wishes and the possible complications of them to be put on arcs as well.

Dr. Gero also has a major storyline as he is literally an evil that could surpass the comedic Pilaf.

There is even a business conspiracy arc that pits Dr. Gero, Dr. Brief of Capsule Corp., and Emperor Pilaf against each other.

I also plans to put Bulma in a more forefront role as her genius isn't any less than the others. Her creation of the Dragon Radar is a testament to that.

Senzu Beans, Evil King Piccolo, Kami, Piccolo Jr., Korin, and all the considered peaks of Earth are also deserving of their expansive stories. Even FortuneTeller Baba has a much in-depth exploration of her lore.I still hasn't even touched the Saiyan stories and Galactic threats such as Freeza and Broly.

This is now an American comic book and i have to ditch a lot of quirks from Japanese manga like calling issues as chapters.

For starters, instead of right to left, it was better to use the standard left to right. Flipping the pages, arranging the panels, and speech bubbles would follow that general sense of direction.