Hello,
whatever time of day it is when you read this I hope this message finds you well. I have decided to add one more task to the future update. Though I will not be changing the personality or strength of Black Diamond in the beginning.
It has come to my attention after quite a few comments that Black Diamond comes off as very weak in terms of mental and physical strength in the beginning for a 'male' character.
And, even though that was intentional I think I could write this in a more compelling way. So, I will rewrite some of the earlier chapters to reflect my current skill level. This will be done after the mass update, so it will not hinder its progress.
Thank you for your continued support
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P.S. The story description has been updated with a note at the end. The note is more so for new readers with possible problems with how the character has been written than for those that have read the most current chapter in the story.
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Black Diamond
FanfictionStory Progress: Currently being Written _________ The dawn of Homeworld began with Black and White Diamond starting the empire of the Great Diamond Authority. However, as Homeworld grew the two drifted apart and Black was quickly overshadowed by th...